Yay!

I finished my first Martial Arts charm tree for Exalted.
I've got no real incentive, except that I had the idea and considered using it for an NPC, but I don't know when I'm going to get to play again.
Basically, I've just seen enough awesome gun fights vs. sword wielders in anime that eventually I needed to introduce one of those gun-guys into my Exalted cosmology somewhere.

It's a pretty big length of text and a pretty niche audience, so I'll edit and repost it here if anyone actually wants to look it over. I might ask rpg.net what they think, too. Here's the rough draft of the sutra though:

Ill-Fated Harbinger of Victory Style
Celestial Martial Art

Sutra of the Unlucky Maiden

There was once a maiden...
... who was forced onto a path she regretted.
Even though she acknowledged the necessity of the path,
she swore vengeance on her tormentors.
"Creation is greater than we." they told her,
but she shot them dead.
"Survival is principle." she said.